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| Author: | Aylin_Karyn [ Mon Oct 29, 2012 3:11 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Seeking writing critique/feedback |
I'm seeking feedback on "How to Judge a Belly Dance Performance." It's 3 pages, nearly 1500 words, proofread but unpolished. Please PM me if you have a few minutes and would be interested in critiquing this piece. The intended audience is Amtgarders without in-depth dance knowledge, so the goal is teaching a primer on dance and performance without overwhelming the reader with technical language and concepts. |
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