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|Author:||Aylin_Karyn [ Mon Oct 29, 2012 3:11 pm ]|
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I'm seeking feedback on "How to Judge a Belly Dance Performance." It's 3 pages, nearly 1500 words, proofread but unpolished. Please PM me if you have a few minutes and would be interested in critiquing this piece.
The intended audience is Amtgarders without in-depth dance knowledge, so the goal is teaching a primer on dance and performance without overwhelming the reader with technical language and concepts.
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